task 5

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(Writing process about water pollution)

Topic: Water Pollution

Topic Sentences: Nowadays, much pollution that happened in our place for example, water pollution and this pollution gives many negative impact to the place and people around our place.

 Supporting Details: 1. cause a lot of aquatic life to the dead

                                    2. Cause the river and the sea is dirty

                                    3. The splendor of the river has been lost

Concluding Details: In conclusion, water pollution must be avoided so that the splendor of the river and sea will return as before the pollution.

   Nowadays, much pollution that happened in our place for example, water pollution and this pollution give many negative impacts to the place and people around our place. The first negative impact of the water pollution is cause a lot of aquatic life to die. Water pollution not only happens in sea but also happen in the river. Besides, river and sea became the trash disposal. A lot of aquatic died because of the rubbish. The aquatic cannot breath when many of rubbish around the space and in the water. Then, the pollution also causes the river and the sea is dirty. All the rubbish that people throw in the river and the sea are gathered in a place then because the aquatic cannot breath and cannot get the sun light. The sun light is very important to all that live in this world.